Monday, June 16, 2014

Kidnapped

Ini composition waktu Course VII-1. Kami diminta untuk membuat karangan dengan judul Kidnapped dan guru bule kami  yang namanya Mr.Paul mau ending dari ceritanya itu twist alias ending yang ga kepikiran di awal cerita.

Yaa…secara yaa, Mr.Paul itu suka cerita-cerita alayy dengan khayalan tingkat tinggi, maunya itu yang di Bulan ada kolam coklat dan sungai coca-cola, jadilah cerita kami yang juga harus alayy tralala trilili
Di dalam ceritaku, aku memakai nama Justin Bieber. Kepikiran aja make nama si abang itu, soalnya tahun 2010 itu kayaknya, si abang lagi meledak”nya nohhh..

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Have you ever been kidnapped?  I, myself have been kidnapped. It all started when I was waiting for my twenty-one-year-old best friend, Justin Bieber, in front of the university gate last year. This Canadian young man with his green eyes and a hundred and seventy-five centimeters height was the most sensational, popular, and charming singer of the year. We have been best friend since high school.

At that time, Bieber asked me to wait for him. When I was waiting for him, suddenly there were two men who seemed to be in their twentieth, came toward me. They looked very suspicious. Suddenly I thought of my forty-five-year-old daddy who was a successful businessman; he had never had any opponent for his business. Those two men were absolutely not two of my dad’s bodyguards because they could not even be compared with daddy’s high qualified bodyguards.

Just in a flash, my arms had been grabbed by them. They threatened me to follow their instruction. I was shocked but I have to obey them so that I would be safe. We crossed the road, entered small streets, and walked along the crowded pavements. Indonesia was a developed, crowded, and busy country, but there was none realized that there was an English-Korean girl being taken away by strangers.

At last, we reached an enormous warehouse. In the center, there was a helicopter. Sean –that was what his friend called him- pushed me into the helicopter. He tied my hands while the other man was controlling the helicopter. Sean then got my cell phone from my bag.

“Hey, use your own!”, I high-pitched my voice.

“Shut up!”, Cris –the ther man- yelled at me.

Suddenly I felt something hit the back of my neck and I fainted.

When I was awake, I was in a dim-lighted room. My hands were still tied. I saw San and Cris were sitting face to face with a bag on the table.

“We don’t need this one billion from that old man”, I heard Cris said.

“Yeahh! We need Justin!”, Sean agreed.

“Don’t worry. He’s on his way here”, Cris smiled.

Two hours later, Justin showed up at the opened door that casted brighter light out there.

“Let her go!”, he said with mighty voice.

Sean and Cris stood up and looked at him with challenging eyes.

“I’ll let her go, but there’s only one condition, Justin.”

They talked seriously and I saw Justin nodded for several times.

Finally, they let me go. Two months later, Justin released a new album. I saw ‘Justin Bieber ft. Sean-Cris’ on their promo banner.

“How dare! They kidnapped me just because they wished to collaborate with him??”, I mumbled to myself.


Ahahahhh..begitulah ceritanyaaa. Justin Bieber kawanku, dan orang culik aku cuma gara-gara pengen kolaborasi sama Justin wkwkkkk

I got 84/100 for this.. kinda low huhhh??

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